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Thursday, December 19, 2013
Alexander the Great used the geography, his cavalry, and his strategy to defeat King Porus.
This is a good these statement, but you might want to add some more descriptive adjectives to describe Alexander the Great and give the reader more of a visual. You also might want to (very briefly) describe who King Porus is.
This is a good these statement, but you might want to add some more descriptive adjectives to describe Alexander the Great and give the reader more of a visual. You also might want to (very briefly) describe who King Porus is.
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a really good thesis statement It is very concise, but still gets the point across.
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