Thursday, December 19, 2013

HWC Historical Question Thesis: Zack

Perpetrators of the Armenian Genocide, such as Turkey, have lost respect in international relationships while nations tend to show sympathy towards victims of the Armenian Genocide.

2 comments:

  1. I like how you approach this question and I think that you'll be able to analyze this in great detail. However, I would suggest rewording the question a little bit. Maybe add the word "other" in front of "nations" and don't say the word "Armenian Genocide" twice in your thesis.

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  2. This questions is interesting, but I'm confused by the "...while nations tend..." part of the thesis. I agree with what Adam said, about adding "other" in front of "nations". That would make your thesis much clearer.

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