Thursday, December 19, 2013

Thesis Statement

The world's reaction to the Holocaust was so different from its reaction to the genocide in Rwanda because of the increased amount technology.
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  1. AnonymousDecember 20, 2013 at 4:57 AM

    I would change the word "so" to a more descriptive word, and it needs more structure.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 20, 2013 at 5:10 AM

    While I agree with Haylee's suggestions, I think this is a good thesis :)

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