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Thursday, December 19, 2013
Kyle's Thesis Statement
The tension in the East China Sea between China and Japan
continues to grow due to the animosity developed during World War II from
invasion, massacres, and the treatment of the Chinese by the Japanese.
Good thesis! I would find specific massacres and invasions to talk about in your "paper", Or in our case, the outline. Overall, i like this thesis statement because of the 3 points that could easily set up a structure.
I like how organized this thesis is, with three clear points that you can talk about. I think it's a nice, specific thesis statement that you'll be able to write a decent essay about.
Good thesis! I would find specific massacres and invasions to talk about in your "paper", Or in our case, the outline. Overall, i like this thesis statement because of the 3 points that could easily set up a structure.
ReplyDeleteI like how organized this thesis is, with three clear points that you can talk about. I think it's a nice, specific thesis statement that you'll be able to write a decent essay about.
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