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Thursday, December 19, 2013
Thesis Statement
Buddhism refutes the refinement of a singular life on earth while Islam denotes one life to reach a utopia beyond earth and their dynamic creates contrasting ways of life.
Good question, this clearly identifies what your essay will be about. Also, good vocab is used in this thesis.
ReplyDeleteI like your thesis statement, I think it is good that you contrast the religions right away to set up the rest of your essay!
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