Thursday, December 19, 2013

Thesis Statement

Through his relentless nature, civil disobedience, and verbal inspiration, Mahatma Gandhi attained independence for all of India.

2 comments:

  1. This is a very interesting topic, and the subtopics are good. However, Gandhi didn't gain independence himself, so maybe that phrase is a bit misleading.

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  2. I agree with Annika. What you have right now is a good start, but I don't think it is misleading.

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