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Thursday, December 19, 2013
Essay Thesis Statement
The Protestant Reformation drastically altered England, it caused numerous social, economic, and political changes throughout the country prior to the Puritan Revolution.
I think this is a good thesis but "and it caused" sounds weird, I think it would be better if you just took the word "and" out.
ReplyDeleteThis is good, but I think that you should find a different way to state the "Protestant Revolution" because it sounds redundant.
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