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Friday, December 20, 2013
Thesis Statement
The rights of Saudi Arabian women have proliferated over the contemporary era due to soicopolitical factors ushered in during King Abdullah's rule.
This is a really good thesis statement, and I like how you mention a specific time period. My only suggestion would be specifying in what ways their rights have increased (i.e. social, political, etc) so that you don't have too much to write about.
This seems like a good thesis. Maybe give examples of the rights that Saudi Arabian women have acquired.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good thesis statement, and I like how you mention a specific time period. My only suggestion would be specifying in what ways their rights have increased (i.e. social, political, etc) so that you don't have too much to write about.
ReplyDeleteGood job ANGELA!! It might be a good idea to divid it into 3 parts on how their rights have changed.
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