Thursday, December 19, 2013

Thesis Statement

Nathuram Godse was motivated to assassinate Gandhi by a Hindu extremist group, which believed that Gandhi emphasis of nonviolence and influence on Indian politicswere damaging to the country. 

2 comments:

  1. I think your thesis statement is very good and seems to answer a specific question. However, make sure that your thesis maps out what your essay or paragraphs would be about. For example, "Nathuram Godse was motivated to assassinate Gandhi by a Hindu extremist group, __________, and ____________ (other groups/people)" or Nathuram Godse was motivated to assassinate Gandhi by a Hindu extremist group for ___________, _____________, and _______________ reasons." Also, I believe you meant to say "Gandhi's" and "politics were".

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  2. I agree with Haley, make sure to plan out the paragraphs but all in all I think its really good!

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