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Thursday, December 19, 2013
Thesis Statement
The Ukrainian protests have been invoked by Russian Neo-Imperialism and calamitous impoverishment among the Ukrainian masses.
Good start, but needs some improvement. Your answer answers a question and I'm sure that you would know how to elaborate (within the essay) and explain the why and the how, but the thesis statement alone seems more like a general start. I would explain, in your thesis, how this is affecting Ukrainians OR why it's so important. Overall, great job though!
Good start, but needs some improvement. Your answer answers a question and I'm sure that you would know how to elaborate (within the essay) and explain the why and the how, but the thesis statement alone seems more like a general start. I would explain, in your thesis, how this is affecting Ukrainians OR why it's so important. Overall, great job though!
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